W eeee! the water yells as it jumps of the rocky mountain
A crobatic with its air-lined body
T ouched by spray of crystal clear light
E xcited of the competion thats about to start
R unning down with graviyt by its side
F ace first crashing into the horizontal stream
A ll excitment over too fast too soon
L ost in the moment of the dive
L onging for the moment to do it again
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What a fantastic poem Kola, I love your use of personification. Well done!
W atch how i fall from above dancing through the air
A sk me how i make rainbows
T ouch my gracfull splashes of clear water
E nchanted by my rivers and lakes
R egonise who i am by my different treasures
F asinated by my fall from the rocky mountain
A llow me to glide through the mountain fast or slow
L uckly i am here to stay day and night
L ove and trease my secrets underneath my water
because I AM A WATERFALL
WOW KOLA THAT IS AN AMAZING POEM I LOVE YOUR USE OF PERSONIFICATON !
R otton waste damages me
I ncrease my population
V isit me and clean me up
E rosion can damage me
R epeat what you do for me
S pecial in every type of way i am very special in most ways because I AM A RIVER
I Love both of your poems,they are fantastic 😀
kola that poem is really good and you have used amazing personificaton 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀
W hen winter comes im frozen
I nterupted by the sound of the winter wind
L ong lastings sesons with more to come
D rounded with rain but i still flow
R epetive winters are frozen with laughter and joy
I cy wethers help me sleep
V isions of the seasons before and after
E rrupted with vistors crouding round me
R esting is all i need as i said theres more to come
Wowzers Year 6, I am so impressed with your poems! Well done! Here in Year 2 we have just created our own blog and are learning how to use it.
We will be visiting your blog for inspiration.
Blog you soon,
Miss Banks.
hello i like the poems we are doing the same poems in my new school i will always miss the class i have saw a lot of bethany these past few weeks.say hello to sarah,kiana,laura,sophie,debra,ellie thankyou bye.
ur poems r really good 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂